Your current sales copy, flyer, or ad not making any sales?

“Hire me, a 6-figure producing copywriter to tell you what’s wrong with it & I promise you’ll start making more money immediately!

“The best part for YOU is that I’m willing to do it
all for a tiny fraction of my normal fee”

Dear business owner,

Average copy doesn’t work. It never has and never will. What works is above average copy!

But until now, the only way to get above average copy is to invest thousands of dollars to get a copywriter like myself to write it for you from scratch.

You, however, a small business owner, aspiring online marketer, or even an intermediate marketer, as much as your heart desires, just can’t afford to spend that kind of money right off the top.

Well my friend, things are about to change for you, starting right now!

Hi, my name is Scott Bywater and I have made my clients hundreds of thousands of dollars as one of the leading direct response & direct mail copywriters in Australia.

I've helped business owner's double, triple and even quadruple the response they get from the same advertising dollar.

And I've helped them save money on wasted advertising expenses.

So right now you have a prime opportunity. The opportunity that your competitors won’t get.
The opportunity to transform your business into a money-making machine that makes you money like clockwork.

Just how will this happen you ask?

It’s simple…….

 

I’ll tear your copy apart, line by line, from top to bottom for a mere fraction of what I normally charge for copy from scratch

 

Let’s not kid ourselves: You’re here for a reason and that reason is that either, your current sales copy, ad or flyer isn’t making you any money or that you want to get more out of it than you are right now.

Well, the fact of the matter is you won’t make any more money than you are right now…..unless you get professional help.

I don’t care if you wrote it yourself. I don’t care if you paid someone to write it for you. I don’t care what the circumstances are.

The fact is if it’s not working— it’s not working.

But the good news is right now I’m making it possible for you to have a top-of-the-line, proven, globally recognized, and profit producing copywriter go above and beyond the call of duty to ensure your product, service, or whatever it may be, SELLS.

But before I get into that any further, let’s talk about….

 

The difference a copy critique can make & why YOU’VE got to have one

The fact is you have less than 10 seconds to gain the attention on visitors to your website or ad, and if you fail to do this then the chances of them sticking around and actually buying from you has just went down the toilet.

However, just changing your headline alone could instantly increase your sales by 30% or more.

The problem, however, is YOU can’t do this all by yourself, especially if writing compelling copy isn’t your forte. And judging by the fact you’re still on this site proves you could use a helping hand.

But if you’re like most people, then I know the question rolling around in your head right now is: What’s the difference between you doing it and letting me do it?

I’m glad you asked.

It’s because “I” know the outcome and you don’t. It’s sort of like how a dentist knows exactly how your teeth will look once your tooth has been pulled. He knows this because he’s seen it all, he’s pulled thousands of teeth, he knows which roots to look out for and how the nerves inside the human mouth will react to certain movements, cuts, and extractions.

Well, the same principle applies with copy. I’ve been there, seen it all and have worked with some of the most successful marketers on the planet for years, so I know the pitfalls and what to say, what not to say, and how to say it.

You see, I have a proven 12-point copy critique system that when applied, results in sales, which is what you want.

And at this stage in your business

  • You just can’t take the “chance” that you’ll get it right
  • You just can’t take the “chance” on saving money—just 1 wrong word could cost you thousands in lost conversions
  • You just can’t take the “chance on using the wrong color combination
  • You just can’t take the “chance” on poor choice of words
  • You just can’t take the “chance” on marketing techniques that couldn’t sell a burger to a starving crowd
  • You just can’t take the chance on sales copy where the flow is jacked all the way up
  • You just can’t take the “chance” with order pages and call to actions that make no sense to no one except you
  • You just can’t take the “chance” on fonts, formatting, and general layouts that are all wrong for your product or service

But when you get an expert to look through everything……

I’ll Show You How To TURN UP The Profits

That’s right. I’ll walk you through how to…

  • Profit on the frontend
  • Profit on the upsell
  • Profit on the cross sell
  • Profit on the backend
  • Profit all the way around

Now I know that up to this point, I’ve made a lot of promises and you know a promise is nothing if you can’t back it up, so here goes:

Take Theo Tsiamis of Accounts Choice, NSW, for example. He had never used a professional copywriter before and just like you, he was a little skeptical about using copywriting services and wasting money on advertising that didn’t work.

Not to brag or anything, but here’s what happened after he used my services:

“When I ran the ads the phones went off the hook. They generated over 500 leads and a total of $200,000 in sales so far (which I expect to double by the time we follow them up properly). I am glad I decided to go with your recommendation of 5 advertisements, and measuring their results because one ad out pulled every other ad by 50%.

Quite frankly, I’m over the moon with the campaign, and most of all the fact that I have a system I can replicate to achieve results like this over and over again.”

…Then there’s Janet Maddock, Promotions Manager, Readers Digest Australia, NSW

“Over the years, I have seen hundreds of copywriters. Scott is without a doubt one of the best in Australia.  He’s one of the rare breeds of classic, results oriented direct-mail copywriters that focuses on bringing the benefits off the page to elicit a response from his readers. His copy is such a joy to read, because it’s the sort of copy that gets a huge response. It goes straight to the heart of what the customer wants and delivers results - and huge profits for your clients.”

…..And Jim Howes, Australian Technical Cleaning, NSW

“Scott, I believe that conservatively, the yellow pages advertisement you wrote will double my domestic turnover. It is attracting a better class clientele, in the 45 & over age group – the ones that don’t quibble over the price and just want a good job done. It’s not attracting the price shoppers. My conversion rate has also increased and I am getting a lot less price resistance. Thank You.”

….Or how about Jacqui Attard, Excellence in Practice, NSW

“Thanks to the letter you wrote, we received 140 registered people to our seminar, out of 800 mailed. I was impressed with it being an unexpectedly high 17.5% response rate.  As a result of the night I received 6 new clients at $25,000.00 that signed up with me there and then. That’s $150,000 in sales! Not to mention what will come in the future and with the additional exposure I received.”

…….And Ray Milton, M & M Pest Control, NSW

“Your advice on measuring the results we were getting from our advertising confirmed my decision to eliminate over $42,000.00 in unnecessary expenses – because it wasn’t paying it’s way. I have noticed a 25% increase in inquiries from our yellow pages advertisement in the first few months it came out.”

Now it’s your turn….

 

A wise man once said everything that we have in life is a direct result of the choices that we don’t make.

The choices that we don’t make are the ones that really matter. You never hear anybody sitting in a nursing home at 80 years old talking about the mistakes of the things that they did do in their life.

It’s always the regrets of the things that they didn’t do that sadden them and depress them in their old age.

Are you ready to take the next step?

If you are then let me go into depth about….

My Copy Critiques

As I mentioned earlier, I have a 12-point can’t fail system that when you do as I say guarantees that you’ll profit.

Well, let’s have a look at exactly what these points are and what I’ll do for you.

1. I’ll rip your headline apart:  Often times marketers, maybe even you, leave this up to their graphic designer, who may not be familiar with direct marketing concepts. Other times, marketers make up their own headline that lacks the punch that it needs to instantly grab the attention of visitors to their website.  

2. I’ll dissect your subheads: The rule of thumb is that readers should be able to scroll and scan your headlines and sub headlines—even if they don’t read anything else on the page, they should still know what you’re offering & be compelled enough to take action. I’ll check to see if your copy does this.

3. I’ll tear your opening paragraph to pieces too: This is where you absolutely MUST connect with the reader, letting him or her know that you totally understand where they are, how they feel, and that you have the solution to solve their problem. Miss this and your copy is sure to fail.

4. I’ll check for legit testimonials and proof elements: There’s nothing more important than ensuring all of your proof elements are incorporated you’re your copy and add up. Buyers are extremely savvy these days, so you’ll want to get everything you can out of your testimonials, statistics and aspects of the sales copy you can use to give you credentials. 

5. I’ll zero-in on your bullet points: In many cases, bullets can make a huge difference to your success and allow you to highlight portions of your copy and provides quick hits for readers – ultimately improving the odds prospects will continue reading your copy. 

6. I’ll clamp down on your USP like a hawk: If you don’t have a unique selling point, then you’re throwing money down the drain, plain and simple. The only way to reach your full potential is to be different than everyone else out there. I’ll check to see if you have a unique twist that will attract a feeding frenzy of buyers.

7. I’ll shred your offer to pieces: Often times I see many marketers struggling to make it clear exactly what they’re offering. Needless to say that if YOU the product or service developer is confused, then the potential buyer is. But don’t worry, I’ll inspect your offer to see if there’s anything out of place or unclear and tell you what you need to do to fix it. 

8. I’ll Inspect your persuasion architecture: Just like your English teacher taught you that an essay has a certain ‘structure’ so does a sales letter. 

9. I’ll double check your target market: This is where a lot…I mean a lot of marketers and business owners go wrong. Targeting the wrong crowd. This can make or break your campaigns, so in this stage, I’ll double check to ensure that you’re reaching those whom you really want to reach.   

10. I’ll study your order page: Your order page is a sticky area, so you don’t want anything out of place here. Good for you that I’ve seen it all, so I know exactly what should and should not be there. I’ll study your order page to ensure you’re all good. 

11. I’ll dissect your call to action:  If after reading your letter I don’t take the bait, chances are that those in your market won’t either. I’ll give you several recommendations to ensure your call to action hits emotional triggers that actually causes potential buyers to take action. A common flaw that I’ve seen over the years is that many offers never ever ask the reader to buy.

12. I’ll tear your post script from the inside-out: whether you know it or not, the P.S. is one of the most read parts of a sales letter. However, it’s also a common area where many business owners goof up. I’ll tear you post script up from the inside-out and check for thing that you should and should not say to avoid any possible goof-ups that can cost you a ton in sales.

 

I’ll do all of this for you for little of nothing, so you don’t have to.

But It’s not how much work a person does, it’s the results that count, which if you’re honest with yourself, is all you’re really interested in….the end result!

And I know it’s one thing for “me” to tell you about the results you’ll receive, but I know that it sounds better coming from fellow business owners and marketers just like you, so right now……

 

Here’s more testimonial PROOF that My Copy Critiques really work…

 

Brett McFall, Australia's results-guaranteed copywriter of over 8,600 ads and sales letters for 153 industries, NSW
“There aren't many direct response copywriters who I can recommend. They have to know how to sell in writing - and do it so well that it reads like pure poetry. They have to be hard workers and committed to results. And they have to have a marketing brain that can solve problems from many different angles. Scott Bywater is one of those copywriters and I use him often. You should too if you want to get more customers and increase the sales of your business ... fast."

Geoff Bromley, What Price My House, NSW

Hey Scott, All I have to say is WOW! I’m speechless.

75 leads from 6,559 emails. You delivered a 300% increase on our normal results. And it’s already generated 2 new clients who are worth at least $3,000 to us. I’ve still got an extra 45 follow up calls to make which I’m expecting to result in another 4 sales.

I am predicting at least $18,000 in sales from a single email. Thank you.

Nick Lockhart MRD, NSW
A few years ago, it was a lot easier to help investors buy property. But then the market turned. Things got harder, and we knew we needed to do something different.

And that’s when we got in touch with Scott Bywater.

Through the advertising strategies Scott developed, our marketing process has transformed. Rather than relying on word of mouth and referrals… we now have an advertising system that puts the control back in our hands.

Previously, we’d be lucky to get 20 people into a seminar room – which took a lot of hard work - and we experienced a lot of anxiety doing it.

In our most recent trip to Perth, we saw 185 people in 3 days (an average of more than 60 people a night) … which is by far the best result we’ve achieved since starting the business.

Our only regret… is that we didn’t implement these strategies a lot sooner.

Sam Bugeja, All Ways Greener Turf, NSW
This year I doubled my investment into my Yellow Pages Advertisement. As a result of the new advertisement Scott wrote, I have already made over $34,000.00 from the $20,000.00 ad at the half way point of the year.

Previously, I ran with a $10,000.00 ad I wrote and would be lucky to get $15 - $20,000 in sales for the entire year.

People are calling me because of the ‘no weeds’ guarantee in the advertisement. And unlike my competitors with traditional ads… I take the time to educate my customer as to the benefits I can offer them.

As a result of the yellow pages ad Scott wrote for me, and the choice to increase the size of my ad, I’ve practically doubled my return on investment… even though the competition has gotten stiffer with 8 of my competitors jumping to a full-page ad this year.”

 

Just imagine your product or service making anywhere from 10% to 50% to 200% or 300% more sales than it does right now each and every day.

Just picture yourself the thriving business that you’ve always known you could have.

Just think for a moment abouthow good life could be, knowing you’re getting the most out of your offer while squeezing out every single cent that you truly deserve…

  • The trips you could take
  • The new car you could buy
  • The dream home that you’ve been eying
  • The extra nights out treating your family to dinner & entertainment

 

Well now you can have all of that and more…..PLUS throw in the fact that……

Your sales are virtually guaranteed
to come piling in…

Though I have absolutely no clue as to what it is you’re selling or offering, I’m so confident in my experience, ability, and skill that right now I’m guaranteeing your success.

That’s right, I’m taking all of the risks away from you and putting it on me, ensuring YOU profit.

If the recommendations I make don't boost your response rates dramatically -- then your review is FREE! 

Just show me what you did and what the results were, and if my recommendations didn't produce for you, I'll insist that you let me refund all of your money directly from my bank account. It’s just that simple.

 

Sounds good?

If so….

 

The time to ACT is NOW

Yes, Scott! Please have your office contact me and schedule me in to have my sales copy reviewed as soon as possible. I want to understand exactly how to improve my sales copy and communications in the twelve critical areas.

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Thanks for taking the time to read through this message and may your sales copy begin attracting more customers

Warmly,

Scott Bywater

If you're uncertain, don't worry...that's a good thing. Think back on everything you've done that was truly worthwhile in your life. I'm talking about things like: asking that special someone on a date ... learning to swim ..showing up for the first day of school ... getting married ... buying your first home ... having a child.

What do all these things have in common?

Answer: FEAR.

PPS: Now think about your normal daily activities...things like: reading ... watching TV ... even attending a seminar ... I think you'll agree that none of them are all that scary. In fact, they're probably downright comfortable!

But I want you to ask yourself, "Where have these activities got me so far?" My guess is you won't like the answer.

That's why my advice is that you follow your fear and take action NOW!!!